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#116 Heaven

Title: Nirvana
Author: Annjej76
Words: 100
Challenge: #116 Heaven
Rating: T
Pairing: Winters/Nixon

You still can’t believe you’re able to share your bed with ‘The’ Dick Winters. You look over and run a tentative hand up his arm, enjoying the feel of his warm soft skin. He looks at you with hooded gray eyes and you feel yourself getting caught up in the storm of your love. Kathy never made you feel like this, you feel something you’ve never felt before: complete. Staring at Dick you lean down and kiss him tenderly on the lips. You melt into his embrace and you think this is what the books described heaven to feel like.

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teaspoonery
May. 14th, 2010 09:43 pm (UTC)
You look over and run a tentative hand up his arm enjoying the feel of his warm soft skin.
It seems to me there should be a comment between 'arm' and 'enjoying' ;)


I LOVED THIS. A LOT.



i say after i had a bottle of wine... i'll comment properly tomorrow *blush*
teaspoonery
May. 14th, 2010 09:44 pm (UTC)
COMMA. Not comment. Jesus.
annjej76
May. 14th, 2010 09:57 pm (UTC)
Fixed! Thanks. I wrote this quickly at work as the muses refuse to leave me alone. Thanks for the comments and editing these are TOTALLY un-beta'd.
teaspoonery
May. 15th, 2010 09:28 am (UTC)
Ah, it's why I love 100-word drabbles. They're quick, short, cocky and you know when they are finished. Good fics to write in the last spare minutes you've got before setting off to school/work/whatever, opposed to epic pieces.

Either way, I like how this builds up, even though it's so short. I particularly love the bit where Nix runs a hand up Dick's arm... It's so adorable! ♥
pairatime
May. 14th, 2010 11:07 pm (UTC)
the love the 'The' great drabble
impala_chick
May. 16th, 2010 03:43 am (UTC)
MEEP. LOVE.
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